Monday, August 22, 2005

the grey flower

Here, hold it;
and hold it close
this metal rose
that destiny chose;
be victor over tyranny.

Squeeze their blood
out their flesh.
Cut their veins
and make a mess.
Worry no more, you have been blessed
with the metal rose that destiny chose.

The golden baby
which lies within,
Use it well
to entice the men.
Then slice the men
Good bye with them.

Click-ti-click
let the wheel move.
Puncture bodies
and deepen wounds.
And when the smoke rises
let the ashes fall
and crimson flow beneath your feet.

Then dip the rose that destiny chose
and color the metal with life of red.

14 comments:

Anonymous said...

I love voilence..sweet red red bloood..aaahhhhh

Unknown said...

heh ..
if youre in UK, u better stop voicing that.
they have just passed a law...
if you support or justify violence of any sort, u shall be kept under a microscope and probably deported .. :P

DARPOK kaheen kay .. :P

anyways TY :D

S. Jabbar said...

oooooooOOOOO freaky...where they gonna deport me? outer space ? i love that space more voilent aliens...green green blood yuuummmm....

Unknown said...

lol .. :P
Thankyou btw ..

Also .. WHIT CHALK .. howd u post with 2 different screen names ..

Blogging is still such a mystery .. :S . :P

S. Jabbar said...

white chalk is my user name.. I was just logged in so it showed up my name..but if u click on the "Other" radio button u can write any name and email ;) yeah any name !!

shampoo suicide said...

Interesting. Has a nice flow to it. Didnt get much, probably cuz my mind isnt working properly.

Unknown said...

thankyou thankyou ..
ITS AN HONOR *bows*:D

yeah and u too white chalk .. :P

Anonymous said...
This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.
Unknown said...

wasalam .. thankyou
well in short its just a violent poem portraying killing for the good. For me atleast.
Hey btw SUbhana .. your website/blog aint working? wassup?

Anonymous said...

A Zabasearch Blog In The Works?
"A Web site that concerns privacy advocates because it makes it ultra easy for anyone to find anyone else's address and phone number is about to get even more controversial.
Great prices on Diamonds,
Come check us out at blue nile diamonds

Anonymous said...

A fantastic blog. Keep it up. Here's the resolve a lot of people are searching for; bible game in respect to info on bible game

Anonymous said...

Nice Blog! Please accept an invitation to visit our Blog. An online ezine with Shopping Cents forums as well as other social commentary forums. New members are welcome!

shampoo suicide said...

Oh yeah, I forgot to tell. New URL: http://subhanaahmed.blogspot.com/

Anonymous said...

xcelente' poeMM ludaA...!! realiee kewLL :D keePP up the gudD wurk.. !! :)