Monday, August 22, 2005

the grey flower

Here, hold it;
and hold it close
this metal rose
that destiny chose;
be victor over tyranny.

Squeeze their blood
out their flesh.
Cut their veins
and make a mess.
Worry no more, you have been blessed
with the metal rose that destiny chose.

The golden baby
which lies within,
Use it well
to entice the men.
Then slice the men
Good bye with them.

Click-ti-click
let the wheel move.
Puncture bodies
and deepen wounds.
And when the smoke rises
let the ashes fall
and crimson flow beneath your feet.

Then dip the rose that destiny chose
and color the metal with life of red.

24 comments:

saky said...

I love voilence..sweet red red bloood..aaahhhhh

L u D a said...

heh ..
if youre in UK, u better stop voicing that.
they have just passed a law...
if you support or justify violence of any sort, u shall be kept under a microscope and probably deported .. :P

DARPOK kaheen kay .. :P

anyways TY :D

Fatso said...

I must confess, I didn't get one word! But I loved it never the less :P

W.h.i.t.e..C.h.a.l.k... said...

oooooooOOOOO freaky...where they gonna deport me? outer space ? i love that space more voilent aliens...green green blood yuuummmm....

L u D a said...

lol .. :P
Thankyou btw ..

Also .. WHIT CHALK .. howd u post with 2 different screen names ..

Blogging is still such a mystery .. :S . :P

W.h.i.t.e..C.h.a.l.k... said...

white chalk is my user name.. I was just logged in so it showed up my name..but if u click on the "Other" radio button u can write any name and email ;) yeah any name !!

Subhana said...

Interesting. Has a nice flow to it. Didnt get much, probably cuz my mind isnt working properly.

L u D a said...

thankyou thankyou ..
ITS AN HONOR *bows*:D

yeah and u too white chalk .. :P

Subhana said...

:P

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choklit shop said...

salam...very well written but i'd really appreciate an explanation!

L u D a said...

wasalam .. thankyou
well in short its just a violent poem portraying killing for the good. For me atleast.
Hey btw SUbhana .. your website/blog aint working? wassup?

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Anonymous said...

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choklit shop said...

killing for good?...interesting...thanx for the explanation!

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Elektra said...

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