Sunday, April 02, 2006

Non

Hear,

indistinct resonance

Echo

distress signal

Voice

me.



Weapon

Is a horse shoe,

Shield

Is teeth

Sheath

me.



Adamant

all beliefs

Weak

is the heart

Constricted

approach

Caught

me.



Eldritch

Is the stance

to

Dig deep

-er

Swimming

To Sink

me.

6 comments:

Comicsans said...

even though i used dictionary to make out some of the words, the whole thing just did not make slightest sense to me.
believe me i dont know how to judge it :S. Is this writing type a talent?

Anonymous said...

Er...

can u give me the directions how to read it :S im not makng fun of u Luda or ure poem i just dnt noe how to read it :S

Unknown said...

I have spaced it now .. so u know what is seperate ..

so .. do you get it?

Comicsans said...

ANA LA AARIF SINGLE HARAF :p

shampoo suicide said...

One
by
one
the
message
fails
for
eternity.

:P

Unknown said...

hehehe .. lol ..

truth be told,

I was in a very weird state when i wrote this.

But thats cool :D