Close your eyes
I am bare
Let me cover
So you don’t see
What I hide
From you
And in vain
From me.
Laugh it off
Its fun to be
Around me
Behind myself
Unclear to you
But you think you know
And I wish I didn’t.
So ignore it
It’s just an itch
To you
it never did
Never should
And so I wish
I dont be
In place of me
Behind the mask
Its hideous
Still for all
It does well
For you too
Its nothing special.
hmmmm, been digging up some files of the recent past. I remember I wrote this before going to pakistan AND i wrote this in 5 mins. But why I wrote this I dont know .....
hmmm...
or probably, I dont want you'll to know :P.
Anyhu, since I already need to build an online data base of my poetry, here goes one more addition.
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do u think this is somehow similar to ur poem Erasing My True Self?
I've heard it said that a piece of creative work is not always controllable. That it controls us so that it can come out. A creative person is not in charge, the creation is. And when u look at the all the things we draw or write and dont' even know why u can see that it's in a way true. I loved ur piece of creative work even though I don't know why u wrote it :)
hmm .. cool. Thanx alot btw. however are those lines yours or from the book youve been reading .. ;) :D
anyways .. hmm .. erasing my trueself .. i dunno, prolly ..
shit ive lost that one .. :S .. :P
creative moments are oh so very unpredictable. I liked your poem.
It was sweet and fresh and very simple. Its very hard to find simplicity in this world, it become so rare with people's pretentiousness.
and thankyou so much for your comment. I really appreciated it.
Oh Gosh :o
thank you Sadaf ..
and sup wid u Subhana ?
Ehem! Is par kuch alfaaz yaad aye, ehem! Irshaad irshaad!
"This is the very perfection of a man, to find out his own imperfections."
- Saint Augustine.
Okay, it might not make sense to you, why I'm mentioning this quote. Dunno myself, but this is what I thought of reading your poem :S ... Okay, I need a glass of water.
That line .. is a very good summary.
Although there is still a lil more to it.
Care sharing? :)
Actually the words themselves are mine but I think it was Stephan King who first said that.
Was it in some 5 minutes poem competition?
LOL no ..
was just over whelmed by something.
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